再次考到原题！雅思大作文高分范文来了！工作和生活能达到平衡吗？

2023-07-25 12:02:16

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今天申友雅思的Pedi老师给大家做上周的大作文解析，一起来看看吧~

01、题目

People aim to achieve balance between work and other activities of their lives, but few are able to do this. What are the problems in trying to achieve this goal and how these problems can be overcome?

02、题目分析：

这是一道 2019 年 7 月 20 日考过的原题。题目里的逻辑比较明显，工作和生活之间的平衡。

比较合理的角度是分析“为什么无法休息”。

具体来说，这个事情中涉及到的至少有三个方向：员工个人、雇主、工作性质，分别从三个角度思考长时间工作的原因，就有大致的框架结构了。

接下来是解决方案，解决方案最好在一定程度上能够照应前文提到的原因，这样可以增加文章逻辑连接与连贯。

03、范文参考：

接下来是高分范文参考，大家可以拿起小本本记录下高级词汇和表达~

Achieving a balance between work and other activities of life is a common goal for many people. However, there are several problems that individuals face whentrying to achieve this goal. Inthis essay, I will state some of the difficulties and then come up with a few possible solutions.

One of the main challenges is the demanding nature of work. Nowadays, many jobs require long working hours and intense dedication, leaving individuals with little time or energy for other aspects of life. Another problem is the rise of technology, which has made it increasingly difficult to disconnect from work. With constant connectivity through smartphones and social media, individuals often find themselves constantly checking emails and messages even during their personal time. Additionally, some people may believe that work is the best way to prove their worth and prioritize it over other activities.

To overcome these problems, individuals can take several steps. Firstly, it is important to clearly distinguish between work and personal time. This can be done by establishing specific working hours and setting aside designated times for relaxation and leisure activities. It may also be helpful to use separate electronic devices for work and personal affairs to avoid the temptation of constantly being connected to work. Secondly, individuals can try to explore new hobbies and activities outside of work, which can help them find new sources of joy and meaning in life. Furthermore, governments can play a role in addressing this issue by implementing laws and regulations that limit employers' demands for overtime and ensure that employees have enough time for their interests and personal lives.

In conclusion, achieving a balance between work and other activities of life can be challenging due to long working hours, constant connectivity, and societal pressures.However, by setting boundaries, exploring new interests, and advocating for work-life balance, individuals can overcome these problems and strive for a morefulfilling and well-rounded life.

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