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题目:
Some people think it is more important to spend public money on roads and motorways than on public transport system such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
题目分析:
本题讨论的是资金花费的问题,即,究竟是应该把钱花在公路建设上,还是花在铁路建设上。
如果选择把钱花在公路建设上,可以写:1)单位长度造价相对低,同样的造价可建设更长的公路,影响更多的区域;2)可以带动周边相关产品,如,加油站,餐馆等,可以解决部分就业问题;3)短途中,运输时间短,可直达,可满足自驾需求。
如果选择把钱花在铁路建设上,可以写:1)在客运和货运方面,运输速度快,距离长,运输量大,解决春运和长途货运等相关问题;2)在相同的运力下,铁路的耗能更低,运费更低;3)在环保方面,不会像汽车那样,产生尾气污染。

参考范文:
Numerous people are concerning about the following issue: which should be given priority, the construction of roads and motorways or that of railways and trams?Different people, from their own perspective, may hold different views; however, I assume that railway and tram construction deserves more attention.
The major reason for my viewpoint is that railway and tram transportation features larger transport capacity, a feature that can benefit people in multifarious ways.Generally, the maximum passenger capacity of a large bus is less than 100 people.However, the capacity of a normal high-speed train unit is about 900, and not to mention the capacity of trams which can easily carry over 3000 passengers on one trip. Thanks to the large capacity of railway and tram network, Spring Festival travel rush may not be a problem at all and commuters may feel at ease to go to work without worrying about being late.

Another reason that reinforces my viewpoint is that the operating cost of railway and tram system is lower than that of road and motorway system at the same capacity. Although the initial construction cost of railways and trams is relatively high, the operating cost of them is not that exaggerated, much less thansome people typically claim. As a matter of fact, many high-speed rail passenger lines have realized a profit until now. It is undoubtedly that the operating cost of railways and trams is lower under the same conditions.
To sum up, considering the transport capacity and the operating cost of the two modes of transportation discussed in the issue, I show more support to the construction of railways and trams.
表达积累:
priority 优先级
feature 以......为特色
multifarious 各种各样的
reinforce 加强;支持
realize a profit 实现盈利
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